Hey, sup? Kasumi here.
How do you like Outsider so far? This isn't nearly the end of my ideas, I'm just stuck right now. So look forward to more chapters, but for now we're taking a break.
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Tuesday, July 12, 2011
Friday, March 18, 2011
'Sup
Yo,
I've been working on chapter 6. I'm only on the second paragraphright now when I was typing this. I've got writer's block. And artist's block, 'cause I can't think of anything to draw either. TT~TT Maybe I'll post one of my drawings one day.... And no, I do not suck!! >:[ I've won contests for my drawings! Can you say the same?
It's Rachel, in case you were wondering. :P I got a new account. :3 Why?
'Cause I felt like it!!! >:O
Whoa, don't freak out on the reader, jeez!
Sorry, the voices inside my head are fighting again!
Haha!! Just kidding, as if they'd want to talk to you!! xD
Heh, Sorry. -.-"
Aaanyways, don't freak out and say "who's this Imogene chick?" or whatever my name is at the time. :P It'll be me, and if we ever do get somebody new to help out, we'd tell you, our readers. <3 :D
I'll stoptalking typing now.
Later! :3
I've been working on chapter 6. I'm only on the second paragraph
It's Rachel, in case you were wondering. :P I got a new account. :3 Why?
'Cause I felt like it!!! >:O
Whoa, don't freak out on the reader, jeez!
Sorry, the voices inside my head are fighting again!
Haha!! Just kidding, as if they'd want to talk to you!! xD
Heh, Sorry. -.-"
Aaanyways, don't freak out and say "who's this Imogene chick?" or whatever my name is at the time. :P It'll be me, and if we ever do get somebody new to help out, we'd tell you, our readers. <3 :D
I'll stop
Later! :3
Saturday, March 12, 2011
:'(
Hey! It's Daniee! I'm sorry to say. I have wrighters block :'( And I don't know what to say :'( So ya.....
Tuesday, March 8, 2011
Chapter 5
Soleil
My ears picked out the sound of everyone getting up.
"Soliel!" Ciel called, and I got up and jumped over to her branch, "I need you to stay here, in case Lily comes back."
"Why do I have to?" I whined, hoping I would sound just annoying enough to go. "It's because I'm blind, isn't it!" I pouted. Okay, so I knew that wasn't why, but I wanted to go with them, not trapped here. "I could sense any danger, help find food, stand guard, fight, and--"
"No, hun, that's not why," Cora said in a soothing voice, interrupting my tirade "We need all those skills, but for something else. Well, maybe not the food thing, 'cause we have some back at our place, but still," She went on, "We need someone here to hold down the fort. In case Lily shows up, the people who took her, or we come back."
I crossed my arms, and turned away a little.
Ciel sighed, "Please, we need you to do this."
I muttered something under my breath and started walking away, throwing over my shoulder, "Fine. But you owe me!"
My ears picked out the sound of everyone getting up.
"Soliel!" Ciel called, and I got up and jumped over to her branch, "I need you to stay here, in case Lily comes back."
"Why do I have to?" I whined, hoping I would sound just annoying enough to go. "It's because I'm blind, isn't it!" I pouted. Okay, so I knew that wasn't why, but I wanted to go with them, not trapped here. "I could sense any danger, help find food, stand guard, fight, and--"
"No, hun, that's not why," Cora said in a soothing voice, interrupting my tirade "We need all those skills, but for something else. Well, maybe not the food thing, 'cause we have some back at our place, but still," She went on, "We need someone here to hold down the fort. In case Lily shows up, the people who took her, or we come back."
I crossed my arms, and turned away a little.
Ciel sighed, "Please, we need you to do this."
I muttered something under my breath and started walking away, throwing over my shoulder, "Fine. But you owe me!"
*****
Here's a list of some of my favourite hobbies.
Surprising people
Defeating the baddies
Hanging with my friends
Making bombs
So, as you can imagine, I'm gonna combine 1, 2 and 4! I love to make bombs; I can always tell which wires are which, so I don't have a problem.
"Hmmm......Ace's alarm clock, check; car battery", now where did I get that, you may ask? I collect them for an emergency, but only 3 or 4, and I keep a stash here.
I finished making the bomb about half an hour later. You may be thinking 'Aww, why don't you tell us how you made it?' There is no freaking way I will tell you how to make a bomb! I think the world has enough crazy people, like my mother.... My eyes dull and I shake my head. Now..... Let's see.....
I rolled by cloudy blue blind eyes, "Oh wait, I can't!" I say out loud. Snap! My head whips around at the sound of a braking branch.
Where is she! I hear from someone's mind. I can just make out a radio,
"-Pssh- I -Psssh- the target -Psssh- in -Psssh- house." My head starts to spin with all the toughts that are coming from the people outside. 1, 2, 3- 5- 8! Eight people out there surrounding the house and a truck with 4 people in it. Wow! I feel so... wanted... but they should know by know they need more people. I pick up the bomb and climb up the stairs, locate the door to the roof and climb out.
There she is! Up on the roof! One of the men thought. I hold the bomb over my head and chuck it down-wards.
A man screams "Bomb!"just as another man is screaming "Oh fu-!" and I'm thinking Any second now...and they're cut off with a --
"Mr. Zlo wants to see you...." One of the men snicker in my ear, my eyes widened in horror. Not him! I think quickly before a sharp pain exploded in the side of my head and I black out.
Not him....
"Hmmm......Ace's alarm clock, check; car battery", now where did I get that, you may ask? I collect them for an emergency, but only 3 or 4, and I keep a stash here.
I finished making the bomb about half an hour later. You may be thinking 'Aww, why don't you tell us how you made it?' There is no freaking way I will tell you how to make a bomb! I think the world has enough crazy people, like my mother.... My eyes dull and I shake my head. Now..... Let's see.....
I rolled by cloudy blue blind eyes, "Oh wait, I can't!" I say out loud. Snap! My head whips around at the sound of a braking branch.
Where is she! I hear from someone's mind. I can just make out a radio,
"-Pssh- I -Psssh- the target -Psssh- in -Psssh- house." My head starts to spin with all the toughts that are coming from the people outside. 1, 2, 3- 5- 8! Eight people out there surrounding the house and a truck with 4 people in it. Wow! I feel so... wanted... but they should know by know they need more people. I pick up the bomb and climb up the stairs, locate the door to the roof and climb out.
There she is! Up on the roof! One of the men thought. I hold the bomb over my head and chuck it down-wards.
A man screams "Bomb!"just as another man is screaming "Oh fu-!" and I'm thinking Any second now...and they're cut off with a --
BOOOOOMMM
Even though I can't see, I can still feel the shock waves, the sound, the heat... It was a pretty good bomb. I step off the roof and land neatly on the ground without a sound. My mind scans around me. Seven of the men out of twelve dead; I could have done better. Note to self: Work on aiming under pressure. I realise that I'm not the only conscious person here, and before I could run, or even kick them, two men grab my arms. I've never been shy of using crotch shots, so when I start kicking, and my foot colides with a satisfying Thump and a short cry of pain, I smiled and was rewarded by being slugged in the face, and I think it cracked my cheek. I know the skin split. Jerk! I think. Well, I didn't actually think jerk, but let's just say I thought jerk. Then I let out a cry as one of the men twist my arm in an awkward angle. Stop! I think desperately, You're going to break my--! Snap!. I let out a chocked sob. And there it goes! I keep struggling even if one of my arms is crying out in pain and useless."Mr. Zlo wants to see you...." One of the men snicker in my ear, my eyes widened in horror. Not him! I think quickly before a sharp pain exploded in the side of my head and I black out.
Not him....
D:
I'm soo sorry I haven't been posting!! D: I'll post chap. 5 right now.
On the other hand, I'm SUPER excited, 'cause I won a contest!! xD
Well, I'm going to go post chap 5. Good day to you, sir.
I said GOOD DAY!!!!! >:O
lol
On the other hand, I'm SUPER excited, 'cause I won a contest!! xD
Well, I'm going to go post chap 5. Good day to you, sir.
I said GOOD DAY!!!!! >:O
lol
Wednesday, March 2, 2011
Chapter 6
I climbed out of the water shivering with the cold. I nearly froze, but that was.... I don't know how to describe it. The underwater cave behind the waterfall... all the fish.... They were like nothing I'd ever seen before. Either they were super-advanced fish, or I'm getting weirder by the minute. Either way, I could communicate with them, like the haunting melody of a half forgotten song echoing through your head. Who said poetry was dead? I could feel a crackling through the water, like electricity. The rushing in my ears. They were... upset. Angry.
I gathered my clothes up, trying not to get them too wet, and climbed up the rocks, trying to find a place to sit that's out of the direct line of trees, but also so I could see anyone approaching, and lots of sun and sun-warmed rocks, and fairly comfortable. Let me tell you, not easy to come by. I laid my clothes out, then settled down beside them, trying to get comfortable. I rolled onto my side, and curled up, trying to sort through my jumbled thoughts and feelings, to forget where I was in unconsciousness.
I gathered my clothes up, trying not to get them too wet, and climbed up the rocks, trying to find a place to sit that's out of the direct line of trees, but also so I could see anyone approaching, and lots of sun and sun-warmed rocks, and fairly comfortable. Let me tell you, not easy to come by. I laid my clothes out, then settled down beside them, trying to get comfortable. I rolled onto my side, and curled up, trying to sort through my jumbled thoughts and feelings, to forget where I was in unconsciousness.
*****
I stood up with the pounding of the waterfall ringing in my ears, driving out any other thought. That was before I realized I wasn't near the waterfall. Suprisingly, I was fully clothed, but not in those flimsy skirts and t-shirts the real Lily wears. I was wearing my favoured outfit, my black leather jacket and black pants.
After I had finished checking to see that I was wearing clothes, I started inspecting my surroundings. I walked past metal crates scatered around, sometimes in a pattern, but mostly not. There were lots of old pipes in the ceiling, and where they were missing, you could more often than not find them on the ground somewhere. I kept walking past crates and pipes for nearly fifteen minutes, and I deduced that I was in a large warehouse or shipping yard.
"You know that already..." I heard an unmistakably male voice say, just around the corner, it sounded like.
I shoved myself into the small space between two crates, flattening myself against one of them, trying to make myself as invisible as possible when I fell right through it. I nearly fell through the floor, too, but just by instinct, I started to levitiate. In the floor. I thought: if I can do this, I bet I can fly, too! Thankfully, I was right. I started back towards the voices, when I suddenly froze, realizing that whoever was talking might be able to see me. By the same instinct that told me to levitate and fly, I turned invisible. Wow.
I jumped of the ground to get myself going, then flew up to the ceiling of the warehouse, searching for the people who were talking earlier.
After I had finished checking to see that I was wearing clothes, I started inspecting my surroundings. I walked past metal crates scatered around, sometimes in a pattern, but mostly not. There were lots of old pipes in the ceiling, and where they were missing, you could more often than not find them on the ground somewhere. I kept walking past crates and pipes for nearly fifteen minutes, and I deduced that I was in a large warehouse or shipping yard.
"You know that already..." I heard an unmistakably male voice say, just around the corner, it sounded like.
I shoved myself into the small space between two crates, flattening myself against one of them, trying to make myself as invisible as possible when I fell right through it. I nearly fell through the floor, too, but just by instinct, I started to levitiate. In the floor. I thought: if I can do this, I bet I can fly, too! Thankfully, I was right. I started back towards the voices, when I suddenly froze, realizing that whoever was talking might be able to see me. By the same instinct that told me to levitate and fly, I turned invisible. Wow.
I jumped of the ground to get myself going, then flew up to the ceiling of the warehouse, searching for the people who were talking earlier.
Monday, February 28, 2011
Over 900 of you!
Thank you SOOoooooOOOooo much!! I never would of done this without you people who read this blog! Well, okay, I would, but my heart wouldn't be in it. You get the idea. :P
Wow, so there's over 900 of you. Last time I checked, 902. Thank you soo much!! I love you, and I'm sure Daniee does too!! <3 Well, I have nothing else to say right now, except more thank yous, but I'll save those ;) and also,
What do you think of this blog?
I just wanted to make sure you saw that!! ;)
Comment what you think of this blog, any suggestions (although don't say we should put the characters names at the top of the post, we're working on that, and we have our reasons...), constructive criticism (Don't be mean just for the heck of it.) Character suggestions, where you think the story's going, what'll happen to the characters, you can even post your own character, and we can try to incorporate it in the story!
Here's the format:
Name: (whatever you want us to call you character)
Age: *Optional*
Personality: (We need a personality to figure out where the character would fit in the story!)
Pic: (post a link to the picture of the character. this is also optional.)
Again, thank you, and come again! ;) <3
Wow, so there's over 900 of you. Last time I checked, 902. Thank you soo much!! I love you, and I'm sure Daniee does too!! <3 Well, I have nothing else to say right now, except more thank yous, but I'll save those ;) and also,
What do you think of this blog?
I just wanted to make sure you saw that!! ;)
Comment what you think of this blog, any suggestions (although don't say we should put the characters names at the top of the post, we're working on that, and we have our reasons...), constructive criticism (Don't be mean just for the heck of it.) Character suggestions, where you think the story's going, what'll happen to the characters, you can even post your own character, and we can try to incorporate it in the story!
Here's the format:
Name: (whatever you want us to call you character)
Age: *Optional*
Personality: (We need a personality to figure out where the character would fit in the story!)
Pic: (post a link to the picture of the character. this is also optional.)
Again, thank you, and come again! ;) <3
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